“How to Write a Good Story”

Novels

(Below, is commentary from our main blogger, Denise Wilson. She is an inspiring writer, in the process of publishing novels in the future. Here she will give you tips on how to write that perfect story.)

How do you write a good story?

Always take your time and get it right, like any other skill.

Every author is different at what they do.

First, you should gather your thoughts and brainstorm about them.

Next, create an interesting title that stands out.

Make it controversial and different, so it would be able to catch the reader’s eye and persuade them to pick it up and read your novel.

Develop your characters. Tell how they look, act, talk. Make them alive.
Being them to life. As if people can actually see them, hear them, feel them.

The characters should be like real people.

Develop your story. Create a plot.

Make it as if this can actually happen in real life.

Who’s who, what, when, where, why, how, in the story. Who is the main character?

What is the problem or problems that the protagonist (Main character) is having?

Who is the antagonist? Why is this person or thing against the protagonist?

What happened in the story for it to get to this point?

Can the events that takes place in the novel be solved?

The circumstances that build up or arise in the novel is called the climax.

Finally, at the end, you sould give the reader a feeling of satisfaction that this story was worth reading.

That everything is solved.

The characters are living better lives.

Maybe even better than before the situations took place.

By completing these steps, then you will have a good novel that people may want to read.

Not all stories follow this rule but most that are successful do.

You should persuade your audience to want to read another one of your novels again.

Top Five Forgettable but Important African American Women that help Pave the way for Future Generations

In life, you don’t get many opportunities to do the things that you want to do.

If you do get that chance to achieve your goals.

You should accomplish your fullest potential and never look back.

Being successful and making the world a better place is a wonderful thing.

Like the women below, anybody can contribute to the best of society and while they do it, they will leave their marks for all to appreciate.

This is our top five List of famous but also forgettable African American women that made important contributions in breaking the color barrier and paving the way for future generations today.

Ranging from different fields like Entertainment to Entrepreneurship. 

They are all gone now, but their memories will last a lifetime. And even though they were quite known in their time but they are almost forgotten today. Society may have forgotten them, but history sure hasn’t- because they have made their marks in the history books.

(Note: This top five list covers from the most memorable to least memorable.)

 Dorothy Dandridge

5. Dorothy Dandridge (November 9, 1922–September 8, 1965) was an actress and singer. She was the first black woman to be nominated in the best actress category for an Oscar, losing it to actress Grace Kelly at the time. A very attractive and great entertainer. She starred in many films and recorded several songs. One of her best known films which she was nominated for an Academy Award is “Carmen Jones.” Critics gave the film very good reviews. She was sort of like the lesser known Marilyn Monroe of her era. She was also quoted as saying, “If I were white, I could capture the world.” At the time, there wasn’t many starring roles for African American actors or actresses. It took Hollywood awhile to give her the recognition that she deserved. Many years later, Halle Berry portrayed Dorothy Dandridge in a film that premiered on HBO called “Introducing Dorothy Dandridge” bringing the famous actress/singer’s life onscreen. Halle Berry eventually became the first black actress to win the Academy Award, in her acceptance speech, she thank Dorothy and many other notable famous black women. Even though she left this earth at 42 years of age, Dorothy Dandridge would be remembered as an actress who went for all she wanted in her films but achieved only half of it. Because maybe in that earlier time period, Hollywood wasn’t quite ready for her.

 4. Madam CJ Walker

 4. Madam C.J. Walker (December 23, 1867 – May 25, 1919) Her real name was Sarah Breedlove.  She was an entrepreneur, philanthropist, mogul, and much more. She was the first self made woman millionaire. Also during her time, she had the biggest black-own business. Madam C.J. Walker was like the Oprah Winfrey of her era. Owning many successful hair products, especially for women of color, being inspired from losing her hair to an infection-immediately inventing something to help herself and others.  She gave to many charities. After her death at 51,  her daughter carried her torch on. She will be remembered for her skills and successful innovations that helped change a generation. One of her best known quotes that we love about her is this one, ”There is no royal, flower-strewn path to success. And if there is, I have not found it for if I have accomplished anything in life, it is because I have been willing to work hard.

 LORRAINE HANSBERRY

 3. Lorraine Hansberry (May 19, 1930-January 12, 1965) was a playwright and she wrote many different pieces spanning  diverse genres. “A Rasin in the Sun” is perhaps one of her most famous plays, base on her own life. Being very successful, films were made based on the play. She became the first black woman to have a play on Broadway, the youngest American playwright, and the fifth woman to be awarded for her writing piece. Dying young from cancer at the tender age of thirty-four, her brilliant works will have a lasting impact. Most likely, if she had the chance, she would have went far and wrote even more terrific pieces like her other best-selling ones. 

 Shirley Chisholm

 2. Shirley Chisholm (November 30, 1924 – January 1, 2005) She was a politician. A seventh term congresswoman that represented New York’s 12th Congressional District (1969-1983). She was the first black woman elected to Congress. Also she became the first African American candidate to run for president. And the second woman to run for the nomination of a major political party. Determined and feisty, paving the way for future politicians of color and women. She definitely will be remembered for one of the first to break the color barrier.

Bessie Coleman

1. Elizabeth “Bessie” Coleman (January 26, 1892 – April 30, 1926) She was the first African American woman to become a licensed pilot and the first American regardless of race or gender to have an international pilot license. She was a very determined and confident individual. Fascinated with airplanes since she was a child, achieving her dream as an adult. She was forbidden from learning how to manuever aircraft and getting her license in America because of her race, so she had to travel to France to obtain her license. Perished at the young age of thirty-four in a plane crash, and right at the peak of her career. Being a very smart, courageous, and attractive woman, she is a strong inspiration for women of color and women everywhere.

A Message to the Haters…

What can I say about haters (hatas).
There is so much to say about all the haters out there.

For the life of me, I just can’t imagine why in the world would anybody waste their time hating on other people.

I never been a hater. So I wouldn’t know, what someone get out of it. I could careless what goes on in people lives.

I admire others when they are talented. I give credit where credit is due.

I’ll give them their props because I would want them to give me mine.

I don’t hate on them. I compliment people when they deserve it.

Also I give constructive criticism to be fair along with the praise.

There are so many haters out there.
Haters should realize that hating on other folks say much more about you than it says about them.

Most people don’t care what haters, critics, naysayers, got to say about them.

They’re like, “You live your life and I’ll live mine!” or “At least, I’m still sellin’!

Haters ain’t hurting nobody but themselves with their hate, bitterness, jealousy, envy, and everything else in between.

They are just mad because it ain’t them. Yeah, they talk about this person being all that or think they are so much.

But all the time, they are wishing that they are living that way. They wish they could be that cool, rich, famous, talented, attractive.

T-Pain said it best at the 2009 BET Awards Show, he said something to the extent of-that he had to give thanks to the hatas and they are the reason why he do what he do.

Anyway, I guess all those people that got haters and supporters-only hope that as long as they have more supporters than haters, then they will be just fine.

As long as they are on top, selling their merchandise, earning more money, winning awards, and getting even more famous everyday.

They will always have supporters and fans that admire them and buy their stuff.

Also there will always be haters wherever talent/money/fame goes.

Even Jesus had haters back in his day. And he was a perfect person.

It’s the haters’ choice, if they want to waste their time and lives hating on others-then they can go right ahead because nobody cares, but them.

Real Friends

What are real friends?

Real friends will help you out when you are in trouble. Defend you when you need it.

Give positive advice to comfort you.

When you ask them how do that ugly ass top look, they will tell you the truth.

The Honest truth and not sugar coated white lies.

They will come out and suggest better fashion topics if you need new ideas and if their fashion ideas are better than yours and if they can dress good themselves.

They will tell you if that no good guy or girl is right for you.

Real friends will tell you what you need to hear even if it’s not what you want to hear.

They won’t betray you.

Take advantage of your vulunabilities, Con you to get their way.

Won’t lie, steal, hurt you in any way.

True friends will continue to be real to you and not leave you in times of danger.

Are you the type of person you will want as a friend?

In order for you to know if you have the right friends ask yourself, “Are they real like I am?”

What ‘Bout 2Pac!?

They already made the movie about Biggie. So they gotta be getting the one about Tupac ready, Pac’s fans hope so.

In fact, they should have made a biography about Tupac first.

Tupac Shakur is one of the best rappers ever to emerge on the hip hop scene.

Springing hits left and right. Brilliant writing about his life, the day to day struggles through a black man’s eyes, and the constant drama with the world.

There were no other like Tupac and probably never will be.

Tupac’s songs actually spoke to the heart of life.

It wasn’t all about women, bling, and gettin’ more like alot of these other rappers out there, But it was lyrical.

He actually talk about real things. Like he felt what was in his songs.

Examples of a few other artists that do that real good today are Eminem and Chamillionaire. Also Bones thugs N harmony.

It was about hard life, his childhood, the streets, his family, women, what he wanted and what he had.

He also forecasted his death in many of his rap songs and videos.

But if a movie were to come out about Tupac, who would play him.

DMX or JA Rule. Another rapper/actor

Or should it be actors like Morris Chestnut or Meki Phifer or even Omar Epps.

Most likely, the person who would play him would lip sync his songs.

Because I don’t think anybody out there can flow like the way Pac did.

They could try but they would probably mess it up.

Soon the movie would be made.
And whoever play him better bring his A-Game intact.

(This blog was written by Christian Whitewater)

Lindsay Lohan and other ruthless celebrities

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What is there left to say about Lindsay Lohan. It could be alot or not much.
I actually think Lindsay is a good actress.
I use to like her acting.

But over the years, like so many other child stars-she let herself go. Not many child stars live good lives.

It’s sad really. It seem that most always turn out bad. Like their childhood somehow was taken away from them and they make up for it by being notorious.

A few that turn out good are Ron Howard and Kim Fields. I can barely think of any. Some that turn out bad are Lindsay Lohan, Britney Spears, and Drew Barrymore. ( Drew since turn her life around)

Though with Lindsay Lohan, I believe the drugs and the alcohol affected her. Along with the spoiled Hollywood image. Her parents relationship with her seem to be dysfunctional.

The friends, boyfriends, girlfriends, etc.
She recently twittered a topless photo of herself, it’s rumored that she did that to distract the attention from claims that she stoled about half a million in jewelry from a photo shoot but the company says she’s not a suspect.

Who knows and who really cares?
This is not the first time that she was accuse of stealing something. Awhile back, some girl claim she stoled her jacket or something similar to it.

Also who can forget that it was Lindsay whom started the coochie flashing. Followed by Paris Hilton and Britney Spears.

Ever since her run in with the law.
Her car crashes, drunk/drugged out while driving, her chasing a friend’s mother in her car. Then the slap on the wrist punishment after each case. What was it- hours or a day in jail?

But I do know that if it had been anybody else, not famous or rich, they would’ve been thrown the sledgehammer.

That’s what happens with these celebrities. When they barely get punished for their awful behavior and crimes-they will do it over and over again.

All because they think they will get away with it. So far, they been right. But you and me, not so much.

Iran’s challenges

         Oh man, where do I start on what’s going on there. I have no idea! I understand why the protestors are protesting their rights. They want their votes counted. Fair enough. I believe in peaceful and reasonable protests.

       But violence and bloodshed is unacceptable. It is a disgrace to not only Iran but to the whole world. America does have a right to speak out on certain issues, especially human rights. Though there are those times that America and the world are to sit on the sidelines and safely guard situations, such as the one in Iran right now.

        I must say if the situation gets out of hand and spur violent backlashes and gory murders then the world must step up and do something about it. To a certain intent. President Obama is taking the right approach to these conditions. He’s trying to walk a very fine line. Like he did during the 2008 presidential election.

         He had to generally talk about issues not in a black or white issue but an American issue. Just like in Iran, he can’t seem to be meddling in another country’s problems nor sit back and relax on the sidelines. He’s doing the right things, by talking generally about fair and just elections, peaceful stands, and democracy to all.

           He isn’t taking sides from either stance. The GOP is arguing that President Obama should be tough and speak out more intently. Senator McCain seem to think so along with the others in his party. That’s the problem right there. Trying to be the Decider-in-Chief, my way or the highway, and a bully. What does this remind us of, you guess it, the last adminstration.

            This is the main reason why America has become one of the most hated countries across the sea. It is not necessary. . We should try to work with our allies and talk to our enemies in an assertive way. Listen to them. Talk to them. Work with them. We’ll help them out then they will help us out.

             To those  hostile countries that won’t, then that’s their choice.  We can then team up with our friends to develop consequences to those that choose to disrupt and harm other nations. But we can only do that if we have allies. We surly can’t get along far by ourselves.

Politics GOP v.s. DEM

      

          

         What else can be said about the Democrats and the

Republicans. With this ongoing battle between healthcare:

Public or private or government run or whatever. I’m like

shut-up already and stop playing  politics with the public’s

healthcare. People should be  able to choose what they want.

         If they like their healthcare then they should be able

to keep it. If they want something different then they

can choose what kind of plan they want. I honestly believe

everyone have a right to heathcare.

            As an Independent or centrist, or whatever  term the

media call for people that don’t fall in any specific party

line these days. If I were a democrat, I’ll probably be a

conservative democrat or if I were a republican, I’ll

probably be a moderate one. I am conservative on alot of

issues on one side of the political spectrum and then I’m

liberal on the other side. (I’ll go in more detail in another

post later on.) Enough about my political views now.

            I just think the GOP should just stop unnecessarily

criticizing  President Obama on everything, anything that

he does.That make them look more and more like the

party of NO and no new ideas, but the same old-not-

working politics of 2001-2008 or Bush-era failures. The

GOP should offer constructive criticism and new

ideas for the public.

           The general public’s like, “Ok, I heard what you

said about Obama’s policies. They’re all bad for  me. I got

that part already. So stop repeating it. But what I do want

to know, what’s your policies or the alternative.” See what

I’m talking about. It’s makes so much sense. So the GOP

needs to stop talking about Obama all the time and tell us

what their plans are.

           Now, don’t get me wrong. They can still offer relevant

critiques. That’s exactly what President Obama and his

administation are doing, and it’s the right approach.

Lastly, I just hope the GOP take a page out of the Obama

playbook before it’s too late and they lose in  another,

bigger landslide in the 2010 and 2012 elections.